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I'm no poet... it just sort of came out this way

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From the moment I first saw you, I wanted to be part of you. You came into my life unannounced, unpretentious... no chance for disappointment. Your presence was captivating. I followed as if on a string... you never so much as noticed. I can't help but wonder if you knew. My eyes traced your every movement regardless of how small. Every graceful step... every touch of the glass to your lips... every turn of your head... I watched in awe. The smell of your hair, the sound of your voice, the touch of your skin... all more precious than the air I breathe. Now your life is about to change. I tremble with anticipation... ache over the fear of your pain... prostrated by thoughts of rejection. Over the miles of empty space, I long for your touch. Through countless hours and endless time, I wait for the moment. My life's goals have decayed and tumbled... all gone, save one. To lose myself completely... and find myself in you.

Posted on Sep 07, 2006 at 08:39 PM Like Reply / Add Comments Quote Report
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@ loves2rde - I promise I won't run fast. ;)

Posted on Sep 18, 2006 at 02:02 PM Like Reply / Add Comments Quote Report
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You have "inspiration" in your soul now... don't lose it!

Posted on Sep 10, 2006 at 11:43 AM Reply / Add Comments Quote Report
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@ maneater - I am... not sure what I'm going to do with them, but I'm saving them. I really didn't set out to write poetry. In fact, if any of you had known me throughout any time in my life, you would have laughed at the thought of me even TRYING to write poetry. When I write, which is often as I'm driving, I jot down thoughts and phrases that come to mind. This just fell into place and I liked the feel of it. Regardless, I appreciate the comments and I'll keep posting them here as long as you're interested.

Posted on Sep 08, 2006 at 07:22 PM Like Reply / Add Comments Quote Report
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You're poetry reveals feeling and personality..... that makes you special Botar!!! Your poem is very touching. I've found poetry to be a geat reward. It has multiplied my enjoyments and has given me the habit of wishing to discover the good and the beautiful in all that meets and surrounds me.

Posted on Sep 08, 2006 at 01:57 PM Reply / Add Comments Quote Report
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Wow...very impressive, excellent piece. Seems you have a special gift in this area...

Posted on Sep 08, 2006 at 09:14 AM Like Reply / Add Comments Quote Report
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Beautiful poem.

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Posted on Sep 08, 2006 at 09:11 AM Reply / Add Comments Quote Report
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BEAUTIFUL!!!! Made my morning..that was really good! I have had those visions/moments/memories. Thanks Suz~;)

Posted on Sep 08, 2006 at 05:43 AM Like Reply / Add Comments Quote Report